Kuba
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« Reply #5 on: Sep 04 2010, 12:36:51 » |
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Basically it is okay, but you have to think about the phonological and orthographical rules determining laxness/length. As you seem to go rather the German/Swedish way than the Finnish or Hungarian/Irish one, I would abolish the digraphs <bb>, <xx>, <ss>, <ll>, <tt> and <ff>, changing them into e.g. <bv>, <dx>, <ts> or <ds>, <lh>, <tx> or <tg> or <td> and <pf>, <ph> or <pv> respectively, because that gives you the possibility of indicating short stressed vowels the way some Germanic languages do, cf German <schief> [Si:f] vs. <Schiff> [SIf] <Lüge> [ly:g@] vs. <Lücke> [lYk@] <Buch> [bu:x] vs. <Bucht> [bUxt] <kam> [ka:m] vs. <Kamm> [kam] <Robe> [ro:b@] vs. <Robbe> [rOb@] or Swedish <tak> [tA:k] vs. <tack> [tak:] <glas> [glA:s] vs. <glass> [glas:] - but to decide that one would have to know more about your phonology...
I'd be a bit unhappy with the pairing of ɯ and ɵ with ü and o, it's ok, but counter intuitive for me as a German speaking person. I would even extend the vowel system into /iː/ /uː/ /yː/ /eː/ /øː/ /æː/ /oː/ /α:/ (i, u, ü, e, ö, ä, o, a) /ı/ /ʊ/ /ʏ/ /ɯ/ /ɛ/ /ə/ /œ/ /ɵ/ /ɔ/ /a/ (i, u, ü, û or w or ŭ, e, e or ĕ or ă, ö, ô or ŏ, o, a + following (orthographical) geminate or (phonological) cluster) But again - best to decide if you already have a phonology, too, since the orthography reflects the phonology in many instances (like German <ch> for the allophones [ x ], [X] and [C] or <e> for [ @ ] in unstressed syllables).
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